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lady_goo



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PostSubject: in the mind of the lame   Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:39 pm

I wish i had a wish to share with you
a wish that was kind and true.
something that could get you through the night,
marking the dark in a glorious, angelic light.
Though i know that you are cold and wary,
I wish I could show you the worlds not so scary.
from my wish that I share with you
I wish that it was me and you, through and through.




erm so I'm night excactly a great poet so... haha
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Lamia/Human


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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Thu Jan 21, 2010 3:56 pm

i like it but thats just me
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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:43 pm

why thank you Razz
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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Thu Jan 21, 2010 6:08 pm

welcome
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lady_goo



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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:21 pm

when the night calls
hear the moon
when the moon falls
I will be there soon.
crawling in the dawning light
the early birds take their flight.
watch them fly far and free
while tied and hold back we will be.
something that beautifull not fair not kind
though who am I to speak my inner mind.
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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:53 pm

sounds like a song
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lady_goo



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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Mon Jan 25, 2010 8:04 pm

I think most poetry are like songs.... waite....


hmm that would make for a kinf of depressing song though lol
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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:46 pm

so happy songs are boring a never get any real appeal in the world
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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:27 pm

that is so true! heartache and what not arethe most popular material written and they aren't excactly what you would call happy songs
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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Thu Feb 11, 2010 12:01 pm

I love your poems. and yeah the best material is all abotu heartache and misery. thats why i get my best work after something terrible happens in my life like my friend dying.
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lady_goo



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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Thu Feb 11, 2010 8:22 pm

Shocked oh my gosh!! I am sorry about your friend...though thank you for the compliment Razz
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PostSubject: Re: in the mind of the lame   Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:56 am

Dont worry about it. Your poetry is good. Dont doubt yourself.
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